Draft Press Release 1: Announcement
News Release
ABC Real Estate LLC
123 Creative Way, Logan UT 84321
RELEASE DATE: September 5, 2008
President Preston Parker
ABC Real Estate LLC
(801) 555-4567
BILL GATTEN’S TRADEMARK SYSTEM IS USED AT ABC REAL ESTATE LLC.
President of ABC Real Estate, Preston Parker is looking for people who are willing to invest in a creative way of doing real estate. ABC Real Estate wants to help people and help them make money.
Preston Parker says, “Our system uses an ownership mentality.” ABC Real Estate uses a new way of doing real estate called beneficiary-directed equity-holding land trust. BDEH Land trust-system is used to buy and sell real estate. People that can benefit from the trust are seller, investor, credit, and resident beneficiaries.
ABC Real Estate was created by United State’s law in 1914. Bill Gatten simplified this system making it affordable and simple to use. It can be found at landtrust.net
Found at landtrust.net
For more information contact the Public Relations Director Jessica Walker (801) 555-5555.
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posted by Jessica Walker @ 10:19 AM
2 Comments
2 Comments:
Jessica,
This is well written considering the short amount of time given! One thing you may want to consider is the phrase 'doing real estate' because it's not really something you 'do'. Also, ABC Real Estate was not created by a law, but by Parker, so you will probably want to fix that as well. You did a good job putting a boilerplate at the end, I didn't have time!
Jessica, I really liked the information you used for your press release. It explained the company and what it does well. I think that your information could be organized a little better. It didn't seem to flow. Other than that it was great! Nice job!
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